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Similoluwa's avatar

I'm in awe🥺is there any genre you can't pull off?? Because wow. It's always the plot twist for me. The pacing, context and how you just bring your wordings to life, it feels like I'm watching a movie because I can visualise everything in my head, it feels so real!!! A writer's joy is making the readers feel the emotions raw as they come and you successfully deliver that to us everytime!! Thank you and well doneee🥺❤❤

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Ebun's avatar

Thank you😔

You’re too kind❤️

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Nnabugwu Jennifer's avatar

At first, I was like,"Why would the gateman leave because everywhere was too quiet?" It didn't make any sense. Then, everything started to add up. They must have thought Modupe was deranged. I can only imagine the look on their faces each time, and the way the gate man indulged her by saying the baby was beautiful was a bit funny.

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Ebun's avatar

😂😂that was a gamble that paid off, I guess.

I just wanted to add more “ohh, that makes sense now” moments.

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Nnabugwu Jennifer's avatar

As usual, you've done it again👏🏼. You sure do know how to get the attention of your readers. Please take your flowers 💐. I'm sure I've told you this a thousand times before but you write beautifully ❤️.

I've already subscribed to your other newsletter. I want to learn how to improve my writing so I can be as good as you. I'm ready to learn from the master 😂🫡

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Ebun's avatar

Thank you❤️ “master” is crazy 😭 but I’m always willing to share the things I know

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Eunice's avatar

Whew! I was definitely on the edge of my seat while reading, scrolling eagerly and hoping for a better ending. This was good!!! 👏🏾👏🏾

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Ebun's avatar

Glad you liked it ❤️

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Ibrahim Abba's avatar

Man, the twist was unpredictable. What I like is how I found the gateman's reason for leaving unbelievable, but in the end, it made perfect sense

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Ebun's avatar

Thanks, man🙏

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C.J. Heck's avatar

I'm sitting here with tears streaming down my cheeks. I was not prepared for how it ended. That broke my heart.

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Ebun's avatar
Jan 6Edited

Thank you for reading,🙏❤️

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C.J. Heck's avatar

You’re welcome, Ebun

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Chineme's avatar

this was such a gripping read. The end was such a twist.

You get talent abeg

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The beloved🌷's avatar

Wowwww. Your stories are always amazing ❤️

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Ebun's avatar

Thank you❤️

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Jochebed Aremo's avatar

I'm not crying I promise

Well-done Ebun

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Ebun's avatar
Jan 6Edited

Thank you❤️

I know you’re not crying😪

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Stephanie's avatar

Wow you have so much talent, this brought me near tears, welldone ❤️

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Ebun's avatar

Thank you❤️

Glad you liked it.

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Mary Angela Sheridan's avatar

Surreal, gripping tale. Fasten your safety belts!

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Ebun's avatar

Glad you liked it!

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Eseoghene💞's avatar

Love this piece. The way it played in my head, I was thrown off

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Ebun's avatar

Glad you liked it

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