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Kunmi!'s avatar

This hurts so much.

RIP, Shola.

Oh! To grief a loved one. 😔

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Ebun's avatar

😔😔😔

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didunnn_oe's avatar

This cannot be the end oo 😭😂

Justice for shola!!! 😂 we want justice!!!

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Ebun's avatar

That’s the end, unfortunately 😂

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BiyiTolu's avatar

Ebun, Shola must wake up! I don’t know how you and Lola will do it, but he has to wake up.

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Ebun's avatar

He’s gone o😔

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mbangui.'s avatar

Excellent story.

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Ebun's avatar

Thank you

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Princess's avatar

First, thanks for writing this third part.

But why did Shola have to die so brutally? 😭

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Ebun's avatar

Right? I’ve been wondering too.

Quite unfortunate😔

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Olajumoke's avatar

This made me really sad

Really sad, Ebun.

Yet it depicts what happens a lot of times in this country.

We shouldn't be afraid of police officers, they shouldn't always steal our things or ask for something in return anytime they do their job.

It begs the question, “Aren't they humans too?”

Omoooo…

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Ebun's avatar

It’s quite sad that it happens more often than we even know

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Delight.'s avatar

Ebun has broken my heart again oo.

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Ebun's avatar

😔😔😔

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Jemima's avatar

Why?

Why, Ebun?

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Ebun's avatar

To finish the story naw😔

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Jemima's avatar

😪💕

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Faves  Corner💛's avatar

The police and profiling....a sad world

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Ebun's avatar

Real sad

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Progress notions's avatar

Right from the beginning, I knew this was how it's going to end. I was so scared for the ending before seeing it and you didn't prove me wrong 😭😫

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Ebun's avatar

you’re welcome 😂

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Chiziterem Ihekuna's avatar

Firstly you made me smile, then blush and now I am really crying. That's not fair 😭

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Ebun's avatar

Life isn’t fair😔😔

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shifa's avatar

*then there's me on the floor begging for a part 4*

does it always have to be a sad ending?!😭😭

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Ebun's avatar

Part 4 ke? Abeg o.

My brain Dey pain me like this.

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Chineme's avatar

Ebun doesn't have joy. Please let him stop here before he has me bawling my intestines out abeg

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Ebun's avatar

😂😂 you’re just being mean

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shifa's avatar

you knowww!!

him and happily-ever-afters are like enemies for real😭

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Ebun's avatar

That’s not true😂

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Chineme's avatar

Yaba kor?

Murder Christmas kor

Write a happy story for once

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Ebun's avatar

I’ll try my best😂

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Nhiyha💕's avatar

God!! I'm crying 💔 I've never wished for a happy ending so bad. Why does it have to end this way

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Ebun's avatar

I wonder too😔

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Chineme's avatar

Ebun, respecfully, God will judge you

Respectfully nii o

How dare you do that to me?

If you see me outside, avoid me

Thank God this cruel and unusual form of torture is over cause why am I crying for Omolola and Shola as if its me that lost.

As if they're not fictional.

And it even hurts cause I just got back from camp.

So once again, RESPECTFULLY, God will judge you

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Odeh Victoria's avatar

😂😂

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Ayobami.'s avatar

You said my mind abeg what form of torture is this??

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Ebun's avatar

Storytelling

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Ebun's avatar

As how😂😂😂

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Chukas Chinaza's avatar

Honestly 😂😂😂😂😭😭😭

Not me praying that Shola will not die after a knife stab

This is not fair 😭😭😭

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Ebun's avatar

Rip💔

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Chineme's avatar

This guy😂

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Chineme's avatar

Had me reading in trepidation

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Gideon A.'s avatar

The link to part 1 seems broken boss

Amazing read dawggg

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Ebun's avatar

Try it again, I just used it.

Thanks man.

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