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Kunmi!'s avatar

Oh God! 😭

I don't even know what to say. 😭

You write too well!

But arghh! I don't know if I can call this love.

This is crazy.

Is it that she tied her entire existence to him or the children didn't matter at all to her?

Did she not love them enough to live for them?

What she felt for him, was it love? 😭

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Lenny💕's avatar

Beautiful❤️

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Ebun's avatar

Thank you!

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Kumibea🍃's avatar

😭I have no words

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Ebun's avatar

That’s usually my intention 😂

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Darling's avatar

Guyyyyyy what?? I have never read a sadder story in my life and this was so freaking well written, omg.......you're so talented, this story was sooo touching, painfulll 😭😢😢😥

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Ebun's avatar

Glad you liked it

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Jemima's avatar

This could actually become a movie or a play, you know?

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Ebun's avatar

You’re the second person telling me this😂

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Jemima's avatar

A sign then 😌

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Offkey's avatar

Guy this is amazing and the fact I was think of exact song by brymo.

Amazing 🔥

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Eromosele Elizabeth's avatar

Same here

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Ebun's avatar

Thanks

It’s a great song

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Boluwaji's avatar

Abeniiiiiii. Ha.I know grief in all it’s longing and sadness but this… ha. This, I never want to know.

Beautiful piece, Ebun. Beautiful.

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Ebun's avatar

Thanks a lot. Glad you liked it

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Suliyat Olawoore's avatar

This is so beautiful!! I blame the villagers for Abeni actions.

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Excellence Chim'amanda's avatar

Wow. I am utterly speechless

This is beautiful

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Ebun's avatar

Thank you! Glad you liked it

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Chinasa's avatar

Like others my feelings are torn. But in the end Abeni was a disappointment 😔

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Ebun's avatar

I agree😔

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Etieno Akpan's avatar

I don't know what I feel 😭

Loved it but I don't know what I feel 😂😭

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Ebun's avatar

Glad you loved it

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Temitope's avatar

Seems like the perfect script for a play.

I cried 😭😭

Masterpiece

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Ebun's avatar

I see the vision, you know

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Deepfake with Toorera's avatar

I want to hate Abeni for being selfish but I also envy her for loving so strongly and feeling so deeply. She loved Adisa so much even to the detriment of her children. It was beautifully destructive 🥹

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Ebun's avatar

That it was

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Confidence Sunday's avatar

Well well, I love this but I don’t know what I feel for abeni

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Ebun's avatar

Pity her

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Chineme's avatar

Exactly

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Chineme's avatar

I don't know whether to feel sad for Abeni of hate her for her selfishness.

May we not know grief like this 😞

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Ebun's avatar

I think there’s a bit of both

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Nhiyha💕's avatar

Masterpiece 🥺 loved every bit of it!!

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Ebun's avatar

Thank you!

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